Today I went to room 2 to read my story to them. They gave me lots of positive comments on my writing. Here they are
that story was wicked by Georgia
I liked when they got there punishment by Shaun
I liked the chains by Sam
it was the best story I have ever heard
I liked it when they had to clean the cave Adriaan
I liked the way you could make pictures in peoples head's Mrs Scott
Isn't it great to have an audience for your story writing, Emily. The comments from Room 2 show that they really enjoyed you reading your story to them. Where to now, Emily? What is your next goal for writing? I hope this is just the beginning of your writing journey and there will be many more exciting stories to come.
ReplyDeleteYes I enjoyed hearing you story not that long ago Emily. What did you learn from writing your book? How long did it take you? How many times did you have to re-read your story, adding bits in and taking other bits out? Do you think you are a better writer now having had that experience to write for an audience and read it to Room 2 like an author would at a book launch? Why? Mrs Head
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